Thursday 28 March 2019
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ReplyDeleteKia ora, I am Ivy at Wainui Beach School.
I really liked how you did different paragraphs for different food and different animals.
I learnt that Sheep bulls and cows eat cabbage and trees.
Maybe you could add the capital letter to sheep.
Mā te wā
Ivy.
I will Ivy
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